<?xml version="1.0" encoding="iso-8859-1"?><rss version="1.0"><channel><title>Diary of Priyanka Jain</title><link>http://priyankajain1.rediffiland.com/</link><description>Diary of Priyanka Jain</description><language>en-us</language><item><title>Buddha has come</title><description><![CDATA[<P>Buddha has come home.</P><P>I am at peace. </P>]]></description><pubDate>Sat, 15 Sep 2007 21:00:46 +0530</pubDate><link>http://priyankajain1.rediffiland.com/blogs/2007/09/15/Buddha-has.html</link></item><item><title>An outing</title><description><![CDATA[<P style="MARGIN-BOTTOM: 12pt"><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 10pt; FONT-FAMILY: Arial; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt">The other day a friend and I spent the day in South Mumbai as she wanted to eat some authentic non vegeterian food. Being a vegeterian I don't really know many of these haunts. So I took her to this place called Delhi Darbar near Colaba Causeway where I had gone long ago with another friend who sweared by the food there.  <BR><BR>She was dying to eat some Tandoori Chicken and ordered it. I had my usual nan-sabji, which was not anything great but eatable. But my friend who had ordered tandoori chicken was quite unhappy with the food there as the dish brought to her looked more like fried chicken. Then she ordered some prawns -which looked more like some soup with a few mushroom like things in it. By now she had lost her patience and we left the place. I apologized. I think I seriously need to do some scouting around, knowing places to go out, eat, merry et all. <BR><BR>Guess its a must have social skill. To know good places, what to order there and different budget places. Have picked a copy of Time Out, Mumbai. <BR><BR>Anyways after that we went to Kyani- the Irani Cafe near Metro to have pudina chai and bun maska, khari. [have loads of memories attached to that place:)] <BR><BR>The interiors of the place remain as I had seen years ago when I used to frequent that area pretty often. The snacks, bakery products you get there are really chucka-chak. My mouth waters when I think of it and it is a must stop whenever I am in that area. <BR><BR>Interiorwise there is nothing grand about the place but the stuff is value for money and you NEVER feel cheated about the food there. One would either find people who want to spend less or the exploring kinds who like to try different things there or the collegians. <BR><BR>Oh and the waiter was a real cool dude. he may not have gone to any of the etiquette classes but his charm and approach was warm and friendly-something that people like Shahrukh [I am a Shahrukh fan btw but hate it when he acts pseudo or tries too hard] can only mimick on their shows. <BR><BR>I chat up with Kyani's owner -an 80 year old gentleman whenever I am there. And when he is not around in afternoons, I really miss watching him ducked behind the table and the warm smile he gives when you pay the fare. He never tires talking about how his friend-actor Shashi Kapoor came to Kyani after Bobby released and kept coming after that. </SPAN></P><br><img src="http://ri.rediffiland.com/homepimages/home4/612/08d5e7020d3d7156f426966365686cd8/homep/images/1169627512">]]></description><pubDate>Wed, 24 Jan 2007 13:17:03 +0530</pubDate><link>http://priyankajain1.rediffiland.com/blogs/2007/01/24/An.html</link></item><item><title>Devil's own angel</title><description><![CDATA[<SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 8pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: Arial"><FONT color=#008000 size=2>I am the devils own angel when am alive  what will I be when dust means dust?</FONT></SPAN><br><img src="http://ri.rediffiland.com/homepimages/home4/612/08d5e7020d3d7156f426966365686cd8/homep/images/1169543190">]]></description><pubDate>Tue, 23 Jan 2007 14:51:43 +0530</pubDate><link>http://priyankajain1.rediffiland.com/blogs/2007/01/23/Devil-s-own.html</link></item><item><title>:)</title><description><![CDATA[<A href="http://priyankajain1.rediffiland.com/scripts/xanadu_diary_view.php?postId=1139580047">http://priyankajain1.rediffiland.com/scripts/xanadu_diary_view.php?postId=1139580047</A><BR><BR>Two are fulfiled the rest will follow]]></description><pubDate>Thu, 18 Jan 2007 16:27:48 +0530</pubDate><link>http://priyankajain1.rediffiland.com/blogs/2007/01/18/-.html</link></item><item><title>Without a care</title><description><![CDATA[<FONT face=Arial>Without a care in the world... <BR><BR>somethings just change everything for the better...<BR><BR>they come so unexpectedly...<BR><BR>in the remotest possible situations...<BR><BR>that they take you by surprise... <BR><BR>... these dots signify a lot that untold...a lot that will be 'to each his own'...<BR><BR>today as the year draws to an end... <BR><BR>I thank everyone who has touched my life in one way or the other... <BR><BR>and wish them good luck for years to come... <BR><BR>just keep smiling... no matter what... <BR><BR>its... a circle... everything... comes around... <BR><BR>Love, <BR>Priyanka </FONT><br><img src="http://ri.rediffiland.com/homepimages/home4/612/08d5e7020d3d7156f426966365686cd8/homep/images/1169547865">]]></description><pubDate>Thu, 28 Dec 2006 11:25:27 +0530</pubDate><link>http://priyankajain1.rediffiland.com/blogs/2006/12/28/Without-a.html</link></item><item><title>Vijay Mallya's birthday today</title><description><![CDATA[<FONT face=Arial>I had the rare chance to spot Dr Vijay Mallya in an unguarded moment lounging with two-three people at Baga beach sometime around October end. <BR><BR>There is an absolutely run down sea facing place next to Brittos at Bagabeach. I was around with my friend Vicky who is playing Rajat Kapoor's side kick in Sudhir Mishra's <EM>Khoya Khoya Chand. </EM>We were enjoying our romance-less candle light dinner and debating at the irony of being at such a beautiful place without that 'special loved one' and being caught in each other's company at a restaurant nearby when we heard some soulful music from that dimly lit place. It just added to the whole ambience and blended well with the sound of the waves.<BR> <BR>We did not turn to see who was playing it. In Goa hearing these wonderful sounds from unexpected corners is normal. <BR><BR>Just when we were walking back from the beach to leave we saw a familiar face. Standing beside him were two body guards with stein gun et all. Ah! that's the great Vijay Mallya... I told Vicky!<BR><BR>Vicky: Forget it Priyanka you are too tired and d....<BR>Me: No! It's him.<BR>Vicky: Let me see. Oh yes, looks like him. What is he doing here-at this dark place? Is he hiding or what?<BR>Me:You know his famous Kingfisher Villa is not very far from here. I don't understand what he is doing at a place like this. <BR>Vicky: His entire clan of beauties are also not around. <BR>Me: Perhaps he is also pondering over the irony of life...Let me go and say hi to him. <BR>Vicky:Are you mad. His bodyguards wont let you near him.<BR>Me: Arrey, see that old couple they just went to greet him. Please come na... <BR>Vicky:No I am not coming. <BR>Me:**** you. <BR><BR>I went up to Dr Mallya -who was seated at a less than comfortable table, with beer and two friends for company - completely prepared to be thrown away by his body guards. Surprise! Surprise! They did not stop me. So I shook hands with this guy, said hello and had the nerve to ask him what he is doing in a place like this. <BR><BR>He smiled and just said, "Sometimes you need peace."<BR><BR>Whoaa!!!<BR><BR>The man famous for all his histronics, parties, glitz and glamour... eh... sure knows better ways to chill. <BR><BR>Happy Birthday Mr Mallya. <BR></FONT><br><img src="http://ri.rediffiland.com/homepimages/home4/612/08d5e7020d3d7156f426966365686cd8/homep/images/1166422938">]]></description><pubDate>Mon, 18 Dec 2006 11:19:08 +0530</pubDate><link>http://priyankajain1.rediffiland.com/blogs/2006/12/18/Vijay-Mallya-s-birthday.html</link></item><item><title>Script Writing</title><description><![CDATA[<P><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 8pt; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt"><FONT face=Arial><FONT size=+0><STRONG><FONT size=2>Introduction about scope for scriptwriters<?xml:namespace prefix = o ns = "urn:schemas-microsoft-com:office:office" /><o:p></o:p></FONT></STRONG></FONT></FONT></SPAN></P><P class=MsoNormal><FONT face=Arial size=2>There is a huge scope for scriptwriters today. </FONT></P><P class=MsoNormal><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 8pt; FONT-FAMILY: Arial; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt"><o:p><FONT size=2></FONT></o:p></SPAN></P><P class=MsoNormal><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 8pt; FONT-FAMILY: Arial; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt"><FONT size=2>Scriptwriters may find it a little difficult to break in initially to write for films and big banners but once you have one or two good films to your credit, work and money start flowing in. <o:p></o:p></FONT></SPAN></P><P style="MARGIN: 0in 0in 0pt"><SPAN style="FONT-FAMILY: 'Times New Roman'; mso-fareast-font-family: 'Times New Roman'"><FONT face=Arial size=2><o:p></o:p></FONT></SPAN></P><P class=MsoNormal><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt"><FONT face=Arial><FONT size=2>In films, its not consistent income, money comes in installments or after the delivery of the story. Some also write for advertisements.<SPAN style="mso-spacerun: yes">  </SPAN><o:p></o:p></FONT></FONT></SPAN></P><P class=MsoNormal><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt"><FONT face=Arial size=2><o:p></o:p></FONT></SPAN></P><P class=MsoNormal><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt"><FONT face=Arial><FONT size=2>In television there is a big demand for writers and the money is regular and decent. Some scriptwriters also end up getting assignments to write copy for advertisements, which also is good money and challenge. <o:p></o:p></FONT></FONT></SPAN></P><P class=MsoNormal><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt"><FONT face=Arial size=2><o:p></o:p></FONT></SPAN></P><P><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 8pt; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt"><FONT face=Arial><FONT size=2>The basics<o:p></o:p></FONT></FONT></SPAN></P><P class=MsoNormal><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 8pt; FONT-FAMILY: Arial; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt"><o:p><FONT size=2></FONT></o:p></SPAN></P><P class=MsoNormal><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 8pt; FONT-FAMILY: Arial; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt"><FONT size=2>A film's script is the soul of the film. It needs to be profound enough to enable the actors and directors to do the best. <o:p></o:p></FONT></SPAN></P><P class=MsoNormal><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 8pt; FONT-FAMILY: Arial; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt"><o:p><FONT size=2></FONT></o:p></SPAN></P><P class=MsoNormal><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 8pt; FONT-FAMILY: Arial; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt"><FONT size=2>There is no 'real way' of writing a script. There are right or wrong method of scripting; however there are some basics that one needs to keep in mind while learning to script for a film. <o:p></o:p></FONT></SPAN></P><P class=MsoNormal><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 8pt; FONT-FAMILY: Arial; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt"><o:p><FONT size=2></FONT></o:p></SPAN></P><P class=MsoNormal><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 8pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: Arial; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt"><FONT size=2>Scriptwriter Shibhani Bhatija who has written the script for Aamir - Kajol starrer Fanaa and writer Anand Sivakumaran who wrote Kalyug for Director Mohit Suri share their inputs. <o:p></o:p></FONT></SPAN></P><P class=MsoNormal><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 8pt; FONT-FAMILY: Arial; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt"><o:p><FONT size=2></FONT></o:p></SPAN></P><P class=MsoNormal><B style="mso-bidi-font-weight: normal"><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 8pt; FONT-FAMILY: Arial; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt"><FONT size=2>Read as many scripts as possible <o:p></o:p></FONT></SPAN></B></P><P class=MsoNormal><B style="mso-bidi-font-weight: normal"><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 8pt; FONT-FAMILY: Arial; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt"><o:p><FONT size=2></FONT></o:p></SPAN></B></P><P class=MsoNormal><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 8pt; FONT-FAMILY: Arial; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-bidi-font-weight: bold"><FONT size=2>Most of the Hollywood movie scripts are available online. Search for the name of the movie you want on the search engine then look for its script. Read it over. Try to understand how they are build upon. Watch the film and compare what was on paper and what came on screen. Understanding the process from this point of view is very important. <o:p></o:p></FONT></SPAN></P><P class=MsoNormal><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 8pt; FONT-FAMILY: Arial; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-bidi-font-weight: bold"><o:p><FONT size=2></FONT></o:p></SPAN></P><P class=MsoNormal><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 8pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: Arial; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-bidi-font-weight: bold"><FONT size=2>Break the script into a structure; see how characters develop and change or in film language how the character arc is formed.<SPAN style="mso-spacerun: yes">  </SPAN><o:p></o:p></FONT></SPAN></P><P class=MsoNormal><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 8pt; FONT-FAMILY: Arial; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-bidi-font-weight: bold"><o:p><FONT size=2></FONT></o:p></SPAN></P><P class=MsoNormal><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 8pt; FONT-FAMILY: Arial; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt"><FONT size=2>Shibhani recommends<SPAN style="COLOR: red"> </SPAN><I style="mso-bidi-font-style: normal"><SPAN style="mso-bidi-font-weight: bold">Story</SPAN></I><SPAN style="mso-bidi-font-weight: bold; mso-bidi-font-style: italic"> by author </SPAN><SPAN style="mso-bidi-font-weight: bold">Robbert Mckee <o:p></o:p></SPAN></FONT></SPAN></P><P class=MsoNormal><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 8pt; FONT-FAMILY: Arial; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-bidi-font-weight: bold"><o:p><FONT size=2></FONT></o:p></SPAN></P><P class=MsoNormal><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 8pt; FONT-FAMILY: Arial; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-bidi-font-weight: bold"><A href="http://www.amazon.co.uk/exec/obidos/ASIN/0413715604/026-8140233-1141207"><FONT size=2>http://www.amazon.co.uk/exec/obidos/ASIN/0413715604/026-8140233-1141207</FONT></A><o:p></o:p></SPAN></P><P class=MsoNormal><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 8pt; FONT-FAMILY: Arial; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-bidi-font-weight: bold"><o:p><FONT size=2></FONT></o:p></SPAN></P><P class=MsoNormal><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 8pt; FONT-FAMILY: Arial; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-bidi-font-weight: bold"><FONT size=2>, which is a guide to film scripting. <o:p></o:p></FONT></SPAN></P><P class=MsoNormal><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 8pt; FONT-FAMILY: Arial; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-bidi-font-weight: bold"><o:p><FONT size=2></FONT></o:p></SPAN></P><P class=MsoNormal><FONT size=2><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 8pt; FONT-FAMILY: Arial; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-bidi-font-weight: bold; mso-bidi-font-style: italic">Then there are famous Hollywood scriptwriters like </SPAN><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 8pt; FONT-FAMILY: Arial; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-bidi-font-weight: bold">William Goldman who wrote <I style="mso-bidi-font-style: normal">The first time I got paid for it <o:p></o:p></I></SPAN></FONT></P><P class=MsoNormal><I style="mso-bidi-font-style: normal"><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 8pt; FONT-FAMILY: Arial; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-bidi-font-weight: bold"><o:p><FONT size=2></FONT></o:p></SPAN></I></P><P class=MsoNormal><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 8pt; FONT-FAMILY: Arial; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-bidi-font-weight: bold"><A href="http://www.amazon.com/gp/product/0306810972/002-5920407-9576008?v=glance&n=283155"><FONT size=2>http://www.amazon.com/gp/product/0306810972/002-5920407-9576008?v=glance&n=283155</FONT></A><o:p></o:p></SPAN></P><P class=MsoNormal><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 8pt; FONT-FAMILY: Arial; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-bidi-font-weight: bold"><o:p><FONT size=2></FONT></o:p></SPAN></P><P class=MsoNormal><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 8pt; FONT-FAMILY: Arial; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-bidi-font-weight: bold"><o:p><FONT size=2></FONT></o:p></SPAN></P><P class=MsoBodyText3><FONT face=Arial><FONT size=2>This unprecedented collection of essays, gathered for the Writers Guild Foundation, investigates what it takes to succeed in Hollywood and what it takes to write well. There are over 50 contributors, including Steven Bochco, Eric Bogosian, Cameron Crowe, Delia Ephron, Larry Gelbart, Lawrence Kasdan, Carl Reiner, Alan Alda, Peter Casey and Amy Holden Jones.<SPAN style="mso-bidi-font-weight: bold"><o:p></o:p></SPAN></FONT></FONT></P><P class=MsoNormal><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 8pt; FONT-FAMILY: Arial; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-bidi-font-weight: bold"><o:p><FONT size=2></FONT></o:p></SPAN></P><P class=MsoNormal><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 8pt; FONT-FAMILY: Arial; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-bidi-font-weight: bold"><FONT size=2>Syd Field who wrote <SPAN style="COLOR: black">Screenplay : The Foundations of Screenwriting; A step-by-step guide from concept to finished script</SPAN>. <o:p></o:p></FONT></SPAN></P><P class=MsoNormal><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 8pt; FONT-FAMILY: Arial; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-bidi-font-weight: bold"><o:p><FONT size=2></FONT></o:p></SPAN></P><P class=MsoNormal><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 8pt; FONT-FAMILY: Arial; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-bidi-font-weight: bold"><A href="http://www.amazon.com/gp/product/0440576474/qid=1142947331/sr=2-2/ref=pd_bbs_b_2_2/002-5920407-9576008?s=books&v=glance&n=283155"><FONT size=2>http://www.amazon.com/gp/product/0440576474/qid=1142947331/sr=2-2/ref=pd_bbs_b_2_2/002-5920407-9576008?s=books&v=glance&n=283155</FONT></A><o:p></o:p></SPAN></P><P class=MsoNormal><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 8pt; FONT-FAMILY: Arial; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-bidi-font-weight: bold"><o:p><FONT size=2></FONT></o:p></SPAN></P><P><FONT face=Arial size=2>Some links to movie scripts</FONT></P><P class=MsoNormal><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 8pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: Arial; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-bidi-font-weight: bold"><o:p><FONT size=2></FONT></o:p></SPAN></P><P><FONT face=Arial><FONT size=2><SPAN style="FONT-WEIGHT: normal; FONT-SIZE: 8pt; COLOR: black; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt">You can find a lot of scripts on The Internet Movie Script Database. </SPAN><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 8pt; COLOR: black; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt"><A href="http://www.imsdb.com/scripts/">http://www.imsdb.com/</A><SPAN style="mso-spacerun: yes">  </SPAN><o:p></o:p></SPAN></FONT></FONT></P><P><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 8pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: Arial; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-bidi-font-weight: bold"><FONT size=2>Complete table of scripts available<o:p></o:p></FONT></SPAN></P><P class=MsoNormal><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 8pt; COLOR: red; FONT-FAMILY: Arial; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-bidi-font-weight: bold"><A href="http://www.script-o-rama.com/table.shtml"><FONT size=2>http://www.script-o-rama.com/table.shtml</FONT></A><o:p></o:p></SPAN></P><P class=MsoNormal><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 8pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: Arial; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-bidi-font-weight: bold"><o:p><FONT size=2></FONT></o:p></SPAN></P><P class=MsoNormal><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 8pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: Arial; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-bidi-font-weight: bold"><FONT size=2>Pretty Woman script<o:p></o:p></FONT></SPAN></P><P class=MsoNormal><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 8pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: Arial; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-bidi-font-weight: bold"><A href="http://www.imsdb.com/scripts/Pretty-Woman.html"><SPAN style="COLOR: black"><FONT size=2>http://www.imsdb.com/scripts/Pretty-Woman.html</FONT></SPAN></A><o:p></o:p></SPAN></P><P class=MsoNormal><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 8pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: Arial; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-bidi-font-weight: bold"><o:p><FONT size=2></FONT></o:p></SPAN></P><P class=MsoNormal><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 8pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: Arial; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-bidi-font-weight: bold"><FONT size=2>Memoirs of Geisha<o:p></o:p></FONT></SPAN></P><P class=MsoNormal><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 8pt; COLOR: red; FONT-FAMILY: Arial; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-bidi-font-weight: bold"><A href="http://www.script-o-rama.com/movie_scripts/m/memoirs-of-a-geisha-script.html"><FONT size=2>http://www.script-o-rama.com/movie_scripts/m/memoirs-of-a-geisha-script.html</FONT></A><o:p></o:p></SPAN></P><P class=MsoNormal><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 8pt; COLOR: red; FONT-FAMILY: Arial; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-bidi-font-weight: bold"><o:p><FONT size=2></FONT></o:p></SPAN></P><P class=MsoNormal><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 8pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: Arial; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-bidi-font-weight: bold"><FONT size=2>You've Got Mail<o:p></o:p></FONT></SPAN></P><P class=MsoNormal><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 8pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: Arial; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-bidi-font-weight: bold"><A href="http://www.imsdb.com/scripts/You've-Got-Mail.html"><FONT size=2>http://www.imsdb.com/scripts/You've-Got-Mail.html</FONT></A><o:p></o:p></SPAN></P><P class=MsoNormal><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 8pt; FONT-FAMILY: Arial; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-bidi-font-weight: bold"><o:p><FONT size=2></FONT></o:p></SPAN></P><P class=MsoNormal><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 8pt; FONT-FAMILY: Arial; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-bidi-font-weight: bold"><FONT size=2>There will be some similar points in what these authors tell you about script writing. There is no one-way to write a script. <o:p></o:p></FONT></SPAN></P><P class=MsoNormal><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 8pt; FONT-FAMILY: Arial; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-bidi-font-weight: bold"><o:p><FONT size=2></FONT></o:p></SPAN></P><P class=MsoNormal><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 8pt; FONT-FAMILY: Arial; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-bidi-font-weight: bold"><FONT size=2>Some can be researched on the net at </FONT><A href="http://www.screenwriting.info/"><FONT size=2>http://www.screenwriting.info/</FONT></A><FONT size=2> and </FONT><A href="http://breakingin.net/genre_faq.htm"><FONT size=2>http://breakingin.net/genre_faq.htm</FONT></A><o:p></o:p></SPAN></P><P class=MsoNormal><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 8pt; FONT-FAMILY: Arial; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-bidi-font-weight: bold"><o:p><FONT size=2></FONT></o:p></SPAN></P><P class=MsoNormal><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 8pt; FONT-FAMILY: Arial; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-bidi-font-weight: bold"><FONT size=2>However some basic principles can be kept in mind as the script needs to be filmed into a visual medium. <SPAN style="COLOR: black">It is unlike writing a novel as the script is mostly about what is unsaid. <o:p></o:p></SPAN></FONT></SPAN></P><P class=MsoNormal><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 8pt; FONT-FAMILY: Arial; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-bidi-font-weight: bold"><o:p><FONT size=2></FONT></o:p></SPAN></P><P class=MsoNormal><B><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 8pt; FONT-FAMILY: Arial; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt"><FONT size=2>Real life as inspiration<o:p></o:p></FONT></SPAN></B></P><P class=MsoNormal><B><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 8pt; FONT-FAMILY: Arial; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt"><o:p><FONT size=2></FONT></o:p></SPAN></B></P><P class=MsoNormal><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 8pt; FONT-FAMILY: Arial; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-bidi-font-weight: bold"><FONT size=2>Most of the scriptwriters will recommend that you watch a lot of films. Read about them. Be open to the world. Read non-fiction, newspapers, magazines and keep abreast of current affairs. It some times helps getting that one line you want about your story -- the central idea or premise. <o:p></o:p></FONT></SPAN></P><P class=MsoNormal><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 8pt; FONT-FAMILY: Arial; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-bidi-font-weight: bold"><o:p><FONT size=2></FONT></o:p></SPAN></P><P class=MsoNormal><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 8pt; FONT-FAMILY: Arial; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-bidi-font-weight: bold"><FONT size=2>Shibani states the Jessica Lal case </FONT><A href="http://in.rediff.com/news/jessica.htm"><FONT size=2>http://in.rediff.com/news/jessica.htm</FONT></A><o:p></o:p></SPAN></P><P class=MsoNormal><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 8pt; FONT-FAMILY: Arial; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-bidi-font-weight: bold"><o:p><FONT size=2></FONT></o:p></SPAN></P><P class=MsoNormal><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 8pt; FONT-FAMILY: Arial; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-bidi-font-weight: bold"><FONT size=2>as an example. A woman is killed in broad daylight with many witnesses and yet the accused goes free. That could be your one line inspired by real life. <o:p></o:p></FONT></SPAN></P><P class=MsoNormal><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 8pt; FONT-FAMILY: Arial; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-bidi-font-weight: bold"><o:p><FONT size=2></FONT></o:p></SPAN></P><P class=MsoNormal><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 8pt; FONT-FAMILY: Arial; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-bidi-font-weight: bold"><FONT size=2>The entire thing would comprise of who the girl was, the accused, did they have a connection, how the accused got free, what happens after that? <o:p></o:p></FONT></SPAN></P><P class=MsoNormal><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 8pt; FONT-FAMILY: Arial; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-bidi-font-weight: bold"><o:p><FONT size=2></FONT></o:p></SPAN></P><P class=MsoNormal><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 8pt; FONT-FAMILY: Arial; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-bidi-font-weight: bold"><FONT size=2>Is there retribution? Does the justice system break out?<o:p></o:p></FONT></SPAN></P><P class=MsoNormal><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 8pt; FONT-FAMILY: Arial; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-bidi-font-weight: bold"><o:p><FONT size=2></FONT></o:p></SPAN></P><P class=MsoNormal><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 8pt; FONT-FAMILY: Arial; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-bidi-font-weight: bold"><FONT size=2>Now this real life incident could be an inspiration based on real life. After this point it is up to you what you do with that story. <o:p></o:p></FONT></SPAN></P><P class=MsoNormal><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 8pt; FONT-FAMILY: Arial; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-bidi-font-weight: bold"><o:p><FONT size=2></FONT></o:p></SPAN></P><P class=MsoNormal><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 8pt; FONT-FAMILY: Arial; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-bidi-font-weight: bold"><FONT size=2>There could be so many endings to a story like that. <o:p></o:p></FONT></SPAN></P><P class=MsoNormal><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 8pt; FONT-FAMILY: Arial; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-bidi-font-weight: bold"><o:p><FONT size=2></FONT></o:p></SPAN></P><P class=MsoNormal><FONT size=2><B><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 8pt; FONT-FAMILY: Arial; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt">What is your story?</SPAN></B><B style="mso-bidi-font-weight: normal"><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 8pt; FONT-FAMILY: Arial; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt"><o:p></o:p></SPAN></B></FONT></P><P class=MsoNormal><B style="mso-bidi-font-weight: normal"><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 8pt; FONT-FAMILY: Arial; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt"><o:p><FONT size=2></FONT></o:p></SPAN></B></P><P class=MsoBodyText3><SPAN style="mso-bidi-font-weight: bold"><FONT face=Arial><FONT size=2>Before you start writing, you must have a broad story. It could be a one line on what the story is about. Do not lose track of your story while getting into details <o:p></o:p></FONT></FONT></SPAN></P><P class=MsoBodyText3><SPAN style="mso-bidi-font-weight: bold"><FONT face=Arial size=2><o:p></o:p></FONT></SPAN></P><P class=MsoBodyText3><FONT face=Arial><FONT size=2><SPAN style="mso-bidi-font-weight: bold">Anand says: </SPAN>For example it could be about a girl and guy falling in love, girl's father being in opposition and how they overcome this hurdle. </FONT></FONT></P><P class=MsoBodyText3><FONT face=Arial><FONT size=2>Or it could be like the <I style="mso-bidi-font-style: normal"><SPAN style="mso-bidi-font-weight: bold">kalyug</SPAN></I><SPAN style="mso-bidi-font-weight: bold"> story: <A href="http://in.rediff.com/movies/2005/dec/09kalyug.htm">http://in.rediff.com/movies/2005/dec/09kalyug.htm</A><o:p></o:p></SPAN></FONT></FONT></P><P class=MsoBodyText3><SPAN style="mso-bidi-font-weight: bold"><FONT face=Arial size=2><o:p></o:p></FONT></SPAN></P><P class=MsoBodyText3><SPAN style="mso-bidi-font-weight: bold"><FONT face=Arial><FONT size=2>A simple guy goes on a honeymoon with his wife and without their knowledge they are being filmed while making love. A CD is released, the husband is arrested, his wife commits suicide, he wants revenge against the porn mafia. Simplistically put, that's your story. <o:p></o:p></FONT></FONT></SPAN></P><P class=MsoBodyText3><SPAN style="mso-bidi-font-weight: bold"><FONT face=Arial size=2><o:p></o:p></FONT></SPAN></P><P class=MsoBodyText3><SPAN style="mso-bidi-font-weight: bold"><FONT face=Arial><FONT size=2>Writing the story is a fluid process. It is important to stick to your basic story idea or else you will end up straying from the main idea.<SPAN style="mso-spacerun: yes">  </SPAN><o:p></o:p></FONT></FONT></SPAN></P><P class=MsoNormal><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 8pt; FONT-FAMILY: Arial; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-bidi-font-weight: bold"><o:p><FONT size=2></FONT></o:p></SPAN></P><P class=MsoNormal><B><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 8pt; FONT-FAMILY: Arial; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt"><FONT size=2>Flesh out your characters. <o:p></o:p></FONT></SPAN></B></P><P class=MsoNormal><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 8pt; FONT-FAMILY: Arial; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt"><o:p><FONT size=2></FONT></o:p></SPAN></P><P class=MsoBodyText3><FONT face=Arial><FONT size=2><SPAN style="mso-bidi-font-weight: bold">Anand says: </SPAN>After you have a fair idea about the storyline, flesh out your characters. This must be done before you start writing the script. <B><o:p></o:p></B></FONT></FONT></P><P class=MsoNormal style="MARGIN-LEFT: 0.25in"><B><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 8pt; FONT-FAMILY: Arial; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt"><o:p><FONT size=2></FONT></o:p></SPAN></B></P><P class=MsoNormal><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 8pt; FONT-FAMILY: Arial; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-bidi-font-weight: bold"><FONT size=2>First is the protagonist -- the main lead in the film. <o:p></o:p></FONT></SPAN></P><P class=MsoNormal><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 8pt; FONT-FAMILY: Arial; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-bidi-font-weight: bold"><o:p><FONT size=2></FONT></o:p></SPAN></P><P class=MsoNormal><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 8pt; FONT-FAMILY: Arial; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-bidi-font-weight: bold"><FONT size=2>Then comes the antagonist. The antagonist can be a person or a situation The antagonist is basically a force that is stopping the main character/protagonist from reaching his/ her goal <o:p></o:p></FONT></SPAN></P><P class=MsoNormal><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 8pt; FONT-FAMILY: Arial; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-bidi-font-weight: bold"><o:p><FONT size=2></FONT></o:p></SPAN></P><P class=MsoBodyText3><SPAN style="mso-bidi-font-weight: bold"><FONT face=Arial><FONT size=2>Define who your are characters are, their fears, their aspirations, their family background, who are their friends and their relationship with them, their likes, dislikes etc <o:p></o:p></FONT></FONT></SPAN></P><P class=MsoNormal><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 8pt; FONT-FAMILY: Arial; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-bidi-font-weight: bold"><o:p><FONT size=2></FONT></o:p></SPAN></P><P class=MsoNormal><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 8pt; FONT-FAMILY: Arial; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-bidi-font-weight: bold"><FONT size=2>Side characters can be developed as one goes along with the plot. Spend a lot of time developing your characters -- it's a good investment. The better you understand your characters, the easier it will be to develop the story. <o:p></o:p></FONT></SPAN></P><P class=MsoNormal><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 8pt; FONT-FAMILY: Arial; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-bidi-font-weight: bold"><o:p><FONT size=2></FONT></o:p></SPAN></P><P class=MsoNormal><B style="mso-bidi-font-weight: normal"><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt; FONT-FAMILY: Arial; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt"><FONT size=2>Break down your film into one-liners or a step outline<o:p></o:p></FONT></SPAN></B></P><P class=MsoNormal><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 8pt; FONT-FAMILY: Arial; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-bidi-font-weight: bold"><o:p><FONT size=2></FONT></o:p></SPAN></P><P class=MsoNormal><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 8pt; FONT-FAMILY: Arial; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-bidi-font-weight: bold"><FONT size=2>Write down each sequence in one line. <o:p></o:p></FONT></SPAN></P><P class=MsoNormal><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 8pt; FONT-FAMILY: Arial; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-bidi-font-weight: bold"><o:p><FONT size=2></FONT></o:p></SPAN></P><P class=MsoNormal><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 8pt; FONT-FAMILY: Arial; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-bidi-font-weight: bold"><FONT size=2>Anand says: For example Kunal is arrested and taken to the court. At the court his friend Bhaskar introduces him to his lawyer who will fight his case. Kunal tells the lawyer how he actually got framed in the case. Then there is flashback.<SPAN style="mso-spacerun: yes">  </SPAN><o:p></o:p></FONT></SPAN></P><P class=MsoNormal><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 8pt; FONT-FAMILY: Arial; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-bidi-font-weight: bold"><o:p><FONT size=2></FONT></o:p></SPAN></P><P class=MsoNormal><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 8pt; FONT-FAMILY: Arial; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-bidi-font-weight: bold"><FONT size=2>So these are the broad strokes that you give to your entire script. <o:p></o:p></FONT></SPAN></P><P class=MsoNormal><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 8pt; FONT-FAMILY: Arial; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-bidi-font-weight: bold"><o:p><FONT size=2></FONT></o:p></SPAN></P><P class=MsoNormal><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 8pt; FONT-FAMILY: Arial; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-bidi-font-weight: bold"><FONT size=2>For example if you want to work out a kidnap sequence, find out where the sequence will happen. Will it be on land, sea or an airplane? Will it be at a hotel, etc. You decide it will be set at a hotel. <o:p></o:p></FONT></SPAN></P><P class=MsoNormal><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 8pt; FONT-FAMILY: Arial; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-bidi-font-weight: bold"><o:p><FONT size=2></FONT></o:p></SPAN></P><P class=MsoNormal><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 8pt; FONT-FAMILY: Arial; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-bidi-font-weight: bold"><FONT size=2>Next, what happens in the sequence? <o:p></o:p></FONT></SPAN></P><P class=MsoNormal><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 8pt; FONT-FAMILY: Arial; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-bidi-font-weight: bold"><o:p><FONT size=2></FONT></o:p></SPAN></P><P class=MsoNormal><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 8pt; FONT-FAMILY: Arial; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-bidi-font-weight: bold"><FONT size=2>Five gunmen burst in, grab Kunal, take him out into a van and drive away.<SPAN style="mso-spacerun: yes">  </SPAN><o:p></o:p></FONT></SPAN></P><P class=MsoNormal><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 8pt; FONT-FAMILY: Arial; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-bidi-font-weight: bold"><o:p><FONT size=2></FONT></o:p></SPAN></P><P class=MsoNormal><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 8pt; FONT-FAMILY: Arial; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-bidi-font-weight: bold"><FONT size=2>Suppose you have five scenes in mind for a particular sequence, then you can change the order in which they will appear. <o:p></o:p></FONT></SPAN></P><P class=MsoNormal><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 8pt; FONT-FAMILY: Arial; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-bidi-font-weight: bold"><o:p><FONT size=2></FONT></o:p></SPAN></P><P class=MsoNormal><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 8pt; FONT-FAMILY: Arial; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-bidi-font-weight: bold"><FONT size=2>Read all the one-liners in sequence. This will help to create a mental picture of the film and the direction the story is taking. <o:p></o:p></FONT></SPAN></P><P class=MsoNormal><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 8pt; FONT-FAMILY: Arial; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-bidi-font-weight: bold"><o:p><FONT size=2></FONT></o:p></SPAN></P><P class=MsoNormal><B><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 8pt; FONT-FAMILY: Arial; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt"><FONT size=2>Then starts the actual screenplay<o:p></o:p></FONT></SPAN></B></P><P class=MsoNormal><B><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 8pt; FONT-FAMILY: Arial; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt"><o:p><FONT size=2></FONT></o:p></SPAN></B></P><P class=MsoNormal><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 8pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: Arial; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-bidi-font-weight: bold"><FONT size=2>What is a screenplay? <o:p></o:p></FONT></SPAN></P><P><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 8pt; FONT-FAMILY: Arial; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt"><FONT size=2>The script for a movie, including descriptions of scenes, and some camera directions. A <B>screenplay</B> or <B>script</B> is a blueprint for producing a motion picture. It can be adapted from a previous work such as a novel, play or short story, or it may be an original work in and of itself.<SPAN style="mso-bidi-font-weight: bold"><o:p></o:p></SPAN></FONT></SPAN></P><P class=MsoNormal><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 8pt; FONT-FAMILY: Arial; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-bidi-font-weight: bold"><FONT size=2>The actual screenplay starts after all your one-liners and sequences is in place. These one-liners get expanded into 3-4 line scenes with the dialogues. <o:p></o:p></FONT></SPAN></P><P class=MsoNormal><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 8pt; FONT-FAMILY: Arial; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-bidi-font-weight: bold"><o:p><FONT size=2></FONT></o:p></SPAN></P><P class=MsoNormal><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 8pt; FONT-FAMILY: Arial; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-bidi-font-weight: bold"><FONT size=2>Some people write their screenplays in English for a Hindi movie and cannot write the dialogues in Hindi. In that case they should write the dialogues in English (without that scene is meaningless).<SPAN style="mso-spacerun: yes">   </SPAN><o:p></o:p></FONT></SPAN></P><P class=MsoNormal><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 8pt; FONT-FAMILY: Arial; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-bidi-font-weight: bold"><o:p><FONT size=2></FONT></o:p></SPAN></P><P class=MsoNormal><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 8pt; FONT-FAMILY: Arial; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-bidi-font-weight: bold"><FONT size=2>Certain times, the director, producer discusses the basic story with sequences and you are asked to make a step outline. <o:p></o:p></FONT></SPAN></P><P class=MsoNormal><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 8pt; FONT-FAMILY: Arial; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-bidi-font-weight: bold"><FONT size=2>After their feed back on the same, you inculcate changes and write the final screenplay.<o:p></o:p></FONT></SPAN></P><P class=MsoNormal><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 8pt; FONT-FAMILY: Arial; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-bidi-font-weight: bold"><o:p><FONT size=2></FONT></o:p></SPAN></P><P class=MsoNormal><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 8pt; FONT-FAMILY: Arial; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-bidi-font-weight: bold"><FONT size=2>Here you have the final screenplay with all the dialogues in place. The first draft is over.<SPAN style="mso-spacerun: yes">  </SPAN><o:p></o:p></FONT></SPAN></P><P class=MsoNormal><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 8pt; FONT-FAMILY: Arial; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-bidi-font-weight: bold"><o:p><FONT size=2></FONT></o:p></SPAN></P><P class=MsoBodyText3><B><FONT face=Arial><FONT size=2>Rewriting <o:p></o:p></FONT></FONT></B></P><P class=MsoBodyText3><SPAN style="mso-bidi-font-weight: bold"><FONT face=Arial><FONT size=2>Then comes the hardest part, rewriting.<o:p></o:p></FONT></FONT></SPAN></P><P class=MsoBodyText3><SPAN style="mso-bidi-font-weight: bold"><FONT face=Arial size=2><o:p></o:p></FONT></SPAN></P><P class=MsoBodyText3><FONT face=Arial><FONT size=2>But first says Anand, "Post draft one, g<SPAN style="mso-bidi-font-weight: bold">o out and celebrate. </SPAN></FONT></FONT></P><P class=MsoBodyText3><FONT face=Arial><FONT size=2><SPAN style="COLOR: black">Take </SPAN><SPAN style="mso-bidi-font-weight: bold">a week's break, </SPAN>send the draft around to your friends, get their feedback on what is working, what is not working </FONT></FONT></P><P class=MsoNormal><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 8pt; FONT-FAMILY: Arial; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-bidi-font-weight: bold"><o:p><FONT size=2></FONT></o:p></SPAN></P><P class=MsoNormal><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 8pt; FONT-FAMILY: Arial; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-bidi-font-weight: bold"><FONT size=2>You may want to sulk a bit. Then get back to work. <SPAN style="COLOR: red"><o:p></o:p></SPAN></FONT></SPAN></P><P class=MsoNormal><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 8pt; FONT-FAMILY: Arial; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-bidi-font-weight: bold"><o:p><FONT size=2></FONT></o:p></SPAN></P><P class=MsoNormal><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 8pt; FONT-FAMILY: Arial; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-bidi-font-weight: bold"><FONT size=2>Do a second draft; a third draft, etc. It could go up to many drafts. <o:p></o:p></FONT></SPAN></P><P class=MsoNormal><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 8pt; FONT-FAMILY: Arial; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-bidi-font-weight: bold"><o:p><FONT size=2></FONT></o:p></SPAN></P><P class=MsoNormal><B><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 8pt; FONT-FAMILY: Arial; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt"><FONT size=2>Show the draft <o:p></o:p></FONT></SPAN></B></P><P class=MsoNormal><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 8pt; FONT-FAMILY: Arial; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-bidi-font-weight: bold"><o:p><FONT size=2></FONT></o:p></SPAN></P><P class=MsoNormal><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 8pt; FONT-FAMILY: Arial; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-bidi-font-weight: bold"><FONT size=2>After you are reasonably satisfied with your draft take it to a producer, director or star. <o:p></o:p></FONT></SPAN></P><P><FONT size=2><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 8pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: Arial; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-bidi-font-weight: bold">Shibani says: For example, for Fanaa -</SPAN><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 8pt; FONT-FAMILY: Arial; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.0pt; mso-bidi-font-weight: bold"> my first script to be released. I happened to be chatting with Kajol, and we were talking about her comeback. Now that she has a baby, she can't do a film that involves a lot of traveling. That set me thinking. I came up with a basic plan that she loved. Later, when I bounced the idea off Aditya, informally, he loved it too. The first draft was written in three weeks.<o:p></o:p></SPAN></FONT></P><P class=MsoNormal><B style="mso-bidi-font-weight: normal"><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 8pt; FONT-FAMILY: Arial; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt"><FONT size=2>Get their comments.<o:p></o:p></FONT></SPAN></B></P><P class=MsoNormal><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 8pt; FONT-FAMILY: Arial; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-bidi-font-weight: bold"><o:p><FONT size=2></FONT></o:p></SPAN></P><P class=MsoNormal><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 8pt; FONT-FAMILY: Arial; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-bidi-font-weight: bold"><FONT size=2>A star may want more footage, more scenes, something more dramatic for him to do. Those changes need to happen  a producer might tell you to set the script in a particular location, or tell you that a particular scene will be very costly to shoot, try to work it out within a budget. <o:p></o:p></FONT></SPAN></P><P class=MsoNormal><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 8pt; FONT-FAMILY: Arial; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-bidi-font-weight: bold"><o:p><FONT size=2></FONT></o:p></SPAN></P><P class=MsoNormal><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 8pt; FONT-FAMILY: Arial; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-bidi-font-weight: bold"><FONT size=2>The story will keep evolving. The point is the minute more people get involved there will be changes, which you may need to inculcate. You will need a lot of patience. <o:p></o:p></FONT></SPAN></P><P><FONT size=2><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 8pt; FONT-FAMILY: Arial; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-bidi-font-weight: bold">For Fanaa </SPAN><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 8pt; FONT-FAMILY: Arial; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.0pt">Aamir had a couple of valid points to make about the script. Nothing drastic. Director Kunal Kohli contributed his inputs too.<o:p></o:p></SPAN></FONT></P><P><SPAN style="mso-bidi-font-weight: normal"><FONT face=Arial><FONT size=2>Discipline issues<o:p></o:p></FONT></FONT></SPAN></P><P class=MsoNormal><B style="mso-bidi-font-weight: normal"><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 8pt; FONT-FAMILY: Arial; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt"><FONT size=2></FONT></SPAN></B></P><P class=MsoNormal><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 8pt; FONT-FAMILY: Arial; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt"><FONT size=2>The hardest thing is to <SPAN style="mso-bidi-font-weight: bold">sit down and write. You think of forty other things that you can do like getting a glass of water, going to the loo, go shopping, almost all the writers face the same problem. It's so much easier to think of story, chat with people but the actual thing to sit down and put on paper or computer screen is a lot more difficult. <o:p></o:p></SPAN></FONT></SPAN></P><P class=MsoNormal><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 8pt; FONT-FAMILY: Arial; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-bidi-font-weight: bold"><o:p><FONT size=2></FONT></o:p></SPAN></P><P class=MsoNormal><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 8pt; FONT-FAMILY: Arial; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-bidi-font-weight: bold"><FONT size=2>Writers are at the lowest end of the spectrum when it comes to compensation. One can work on television scripts simultaneously for that important cheque and in free timework on the scripts. <o:p></o:p></FONT></SPAN></P><P class=MsoNormal><SPAN style="mso-bidi-font-weight: normal"><FONT face=Arial><FONT size=2>General tips<o:p></o:p></FONT></FONT></SPAN></P><P class=MsoNormal><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 8pt; FONT-FAMILY: Arial; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-bidi-font-weight: bold"><o:p><FONT size=2></FONT></o:p></SPAN></P><P><SPAN style="FONT-WEIGHT: normal; FONT-SIZE: 8pt; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt"><FONT face=Arial><FONT size=2>Discuss movies with your friends, colleagues, the ones you have liked, the ones you have hated. <o:p></o:p></FONT></FONT></SPAN></P><P><SPAN style="FONT-WEIGHT: normal; FONT-SIZE: 8pt; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt"><FONT face=Arial><FONT size=2>Try to break down and see why you like or hate something, break away from the concept that a movie is actually about a story. <o:p></o:p></FONT></FONT></SPAN></P><P><SPAN style="FONT-WEIGHT: normal; FONT-SIZE: 8pt; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt"><FONT face=Arial><FONT size=2>It's not just the story, if the screenplay isn't good enough; it's not going to work. That's where the characters come in, and the setting comes in. <o:p></o:p></FONT></FONT></SPAN></P><P class=MsoNormal><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 8pt; FONT-FAMILY: Arial; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-bidi-font-weight: bold"><FONT size=2>You could join movie clubs in your city. Like there is a moc-ha film club in Mumbai. A lot of film festivals keep happening in Mumbai. You could keep a tab by reading the <I>what's happening in your town </I>columns in newspapers. <o:p></o:p></FONT></SPAN></P><P class=MsoNormal><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 8pt; FONT-FAMILY: Arial; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-bidi-font-weight: bold"><o:p><FONT face=Arial size=2></FONT></o:p></SPAN></P><P class=MsoNormal><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 8pt; FONT-FAMILY: Arial; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-bidi-font-weight: bold"><FONT size=2>There are online forums like Caferati- the writers network: </FONT><A href="http://bwc-network.ryze.com/"><FONT size=2>http://bwc-network.ryze.com/</FONT></A><FONT size=2> or Indi filmmakers at </FONT><A href="http://actorsworkindiefilm-network.ryze.com/"><FONT size=2>http://actorsworkindiefilm-network.ryze.com/</FONT></A><o:p></o:p></SPAN></P><P class=MsoNormal><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 8pt; COLOR: #333333; FONT-FAMILY: Arial; mso-bidi-font-size: 6.5pt; mso-bidi-font-weight: bold"><o:p><FONT size=2></FONT></o:p></SPAN></P><P class=MsoNormal><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 8pt; FONT-FAMILY: Arial; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-bidi-font-weight: bold"><FONT size=2></FONT></SPAN></P><br><img src="http://ri.rediffiland.com/homepimages/home4/612/08d5e7020d3d7156f426966365686cd8/homep/images/1169548435">]]></description><pubDate>Thu, 07 Dec 2006 13:16:52 +0530</pubDate><link>http://priyankajain1.rediffiland.com/blogs/2006/12/07/Script.html</link></item><item><title>restlessness</title><description><![CDATA[Life goes through phases when suddenly everything is working out, then through phases where there is a lull... a restlessness that comes with a long forced silence.<br><img src="http://ri.rediffiland.com/homepimages/home4/612/08d5e7020d3d7156f426966365686cd8/homep/images/1169547744">]]></description><pubDate>Mon, 27 Nov 2006 20:03:16 +0530</pubDate><link>http://priyankajain1.rediffiland.com/blogs/2006/11/27/restlessness.html</link></item><item><title>Pursue with vigour</title><description><![CDATA[When you are secure with yourself everything falls in place: personally and professionally. 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